Category Archives: Lesson plan

Food for Thought

grapes-by-flauto.jpgWhat is more inspiring than food? Nothing!

I enjoy bringing grapes, carrots, and strawberries into the classroom. I use food as a way to encourage students to make observations. The students make observations of the food’s outside: its colors, textures, and shapes. Students must brainstorm a list of ten words or phrases before they are allowed to eat their food. As they eat their food, they are also brainstorming descriptive words about its taste.

I conclude the brainstorming session by having each student share one idea from their list, which I record on the board. Then I ask all the students to write down three more ideas from the board onto their individual lists.

Next we read some poems about food, and we discuss what descriptive words are used. Students are then given time to write their own poems.

The Perfect Grape

When I touch it,
It is cold and wet,
But soft as a baby’s foot.

When I pick it up,
It dangles like a dangling green leaf on a tree.

I look at it.
It is the color of lilac.

It is sour, juicy and delicious.

It’s chilly like the Antarctic.

It’s green like a
Green lime and reminds
Me of the perfect green grass.

By Clinton, 3rd Grade

A fun way to publish the poems is to have students write their revisions on paper plates.

Posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

Climb Every Mountain

old-men-of-storr-by-inguana-jo-via-flickr.jpgAs a WITS writer, I try to help students realize that the knowledge and experiences they already have are the perfect fodder for their writing. Last week I noticed that the third graders were completing a unit on earth science. To help students review what they learned about landforms, I came up with a new lesson.

What would it feel like to be a canyon, a mesa, a desert, or a mountain?

I split the class into groups of three or four and assigned each group a different geography. In groups, students brainstormed a list of ideas about their land form. Each group presented their ideas; the audience gave positive feedback and also suggested ideas that could be added to the list. After defining personification, I had the students help me write a class poem on a land form that no groups were assigned.

Now it was time for students to write individually. Each one wrote a poem that personified their chosen formation.

If I Were a Mountain

I am a mountain,

I start as a low piece of land.

Then when an earthquake or lava

Comes out of earth,

I expand.

I keep expanding

When these things happen.

Now I’m so high

I can see through the sky.

I’m so high

I see through space.

I see Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiterwits-blog-pics-007.jpg

by Mary, 3rd Grade

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

(photo by iguana jo via flickr)

3 Great Teaching Tips

frozen-brainstorm-by-jurvetson-via-flickr.jpgEven the best teacher can benefit from a refresher course. Patrick Winston, a professor of Artificial Intelligence and Computer Science at MIT, has made a video presentation on his teaching techniques here.

1) While Dr. Winston usually teaches college students, his ideas are also applicable to WITS classrooms as well. One idea he stresses is to circle back and repeat your main point. He observes that at any given moment 20% of your audience is probably fogged out. For a young audience of primarily non-native English speakers, this estimate may be on the low side. In my elementary school classrooms, I try to embed my main points in several different places so children can hear critical information more than once and carve out space for new information.

2) Dr. Winston also suggests writing a road map on the board before you start. By the end of the lesson, you can refer back to this outline to show that you have completed your objectives and rewarded your listeners. This goes double for children; they are naturally curious and unusually prone to talking to their neighbors, so setting out a rough outline of the lesson will reduce their impatience and extend their attention span. Verbal punctuation – moments in your speech that serve the same function as the dashes in this sentence – will also help to focus an audience’s attention and bring drifting listeners back on point.

3) The most useful tip I found concerns the question and answer segment of the lesson. As Dr. Winston points out, a post-question pause of 5 seconds can seem like an eternity to the speaker while barely registering with your audience. Hearing Dr. Winston say that made me realize that my questions are too rushed; I now strive to allow at least 5 seconds for my audience to respond, after I thoughtfully pose questions my audience can answer.julian-avatar-1107-128x160.jpg

That’s just me, though. I’d be interested in hearing if these tips work for you. Perhaps by combining these techniques with your own personal style of teaching, you can find ways to improve the hours you spend in the classroom.

posted by Julian Martinez, Writers in the Schools

(photo by jurvetson via flickr)

She Sells Sea Shells

 

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Nature is a wonderful source of inspiration. I brought in seashells for the class to observe. The children put the shells against their ears and listened to the sounds of the waves. They admired the delicate beauty of the shells. They smelled them and shook them a bit, listening for clues about the soul of a shell.

Next the students brainstormed a list of words to describe the shells’ properties, such as “smooth, pointy, and colorful.” Their lists also included any other ideas they had about shells, such has “hermit crabs live in them” and “they live in the ocean.” We discussed the different ideas generated, and I created a word bank on the chalkboard. Each student created a poem that personified the shell.

A Perfect Shell

I am a shell, as
black as writing ink,
hard as a brick,
and whirly like rich
chocolate.

I am lovely like pasta
on the inside.
I am like glass,
so delicate and
smooth.

Then one day I will wash
upon a beach where
someone will pick me up and
put me in a big red pail.

Don’t you want to be a shell?amy-lin-in-a-maze.jpg

Jonathan, 3rd Grade

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

(photo by ramislevy via Flickr)

Top Poems and Posts for February 2008

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During the month of February, these poems by students received the greatest number of hits on A Poem a Day.

Cloud
The Color Pink by Sarah
Yellow
Skateboarding
Ode to Poetry

And these posts on teaching creative writing were the most popular ones from this blog for the same period.

Tell Me About Your Heart
The Poetry Monster
Among the Antiquities
My First Book
Running for President

Your feedback is always welcome. If you have questions about teaching writing, feel free to leave them as comments below. We will make sure to keep them in mind in future posts.

(photograph by girlhula via flickr)

Ro-box-ic

robot.jpgThe first graders I work with are learning about 3-D shapes. They created robots using cereal boxes and two liter soda bottles. I decided to let these robots serve double duty. The robots were going to be characters in a three part story that would be structured as follows:

Beginning –Describe the robot.

Middle –Pretend you bring the robot home, which causes a problem.

End –Describe how you fix the problem.

As with any decent writing exercise, the students managed to take their stories into directions I hadn’t imagined possible. Here’s one example.

The Vicious Robot!

Once we made robots in school. My robot looks like a monster, also vicious! Then I made a spell and the robot came to life!!! The problem began when I brought it home. The robot said, “I’ll make a rocket for you and I’ll send you to Neptune, but first I’ll let you take three jackets, gloves, hats, socks, and boots.”

Then he sent me to Neptune in the rocket. It was as freezing as one hundred pieces of big ice. Then I saw an ice cream truck that was almost frozen and an alien was driving it. I bought some ice cream with alien money and he took the rocket and sent me to China where people speak Chinese. They didn’t understand me. So they sent me back to Houston.

I fixed the problem by making another spell that would make my robot nice. He said, “Sorry, I won’t do that to you again.” After that he helped with the chores by washing the laundry and making the bed, and it made my life easier.

By Avrami, 1st Gradewits-blog-pics-007.jpg

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

(Photo by bitrot via flickr)

Thinking Inside the Box

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Usually we want our students to think outside of the box, but for this writing activity, I ask students to do just the opposite.

Last week I brought three ornate boxes into the classroom. We sat in a circle, and the students passed the boxes around. I told them that they could shake the boxes, but they weren’t allowed to open them. The students imagined something was inside the box that would give them special powers.

I told the class we were going to write a three part story. Here’s the breakdown:

Beginning –Describe the box and what is found inside.

Middle –What special power do you get? What happens when you get the power?

End –Do you get to keep the special power? Does it weaken? Get stronger?

I told students they could look inside the boxes if they worked hard during writing time. The students enjoyed writing these stories. Here’s one example.

The Magical Nickel

Today I went outside, and I saw a box. It was a big, green, glowing box. I went by it and a magic nickel just came flying out. I soon figured out that it was a magical nickel. I made a wish that I was the fastest runner in the world. Then I did a race with everybody in the world. I always won. I said, “I like this nickel already.”

Then I wished that I was rich. It happened. I was thrilled. I had like a million dollars. Then I wished I could fly and before you knew it, I was flying as fast as an eagle. Then I flew back to my house and went to sleep. Then I woke, did more wishing, and I shared my wishes.

That’s how my life went on until I was a grown up. Then the nickel went back into the box and then flew into a dimension far far far away from here. I tried to reach it, but I couldn’t. But my life was still good. I really don’t need the nickel any more.

by Orkan, 3rd Gradeamy-lin-in-a-maze.jpg

Posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

Running for President

The 2008 presidential elections are fast approaching; candidates of every stripe and background are saturating the airwaves.jasper-johns-flag-moma.jpeg If there was ever a time to broach issues of democracy in action in the classroom, this would be it. While teachers should not endorse any particular political position, the students are usually ready to volunteer ideas of their own.

Last year, while teaching for WITS at Pearl Rucker Elementary, I had a chance to work with the students on a presidential election exercise. One of my students, Darion Waddle, wrote this piece about running for President, which was later selected and read by him at the WITS Young Writer’s Reading at The Menil Collection. This recording was made in the classroom; the students you hear in the background are his classmates, fellow fourth graders from Ms. Kamuiru’s HISD classroom. Click here to hear Darion deliver his address; the text of his speech appears below.

I’m going to be the President of my country because I want my friends, family, and country to believe me, for whatever it takes. I love my country. I will make America a better place. I will make my country clean by my army and stop the war, so no more men will get hurt. I will make America a better place.

I am the President. I will never, ever replace my job with anyone, not even for a million dollars. I will keep my job. I will love my country so much that whatever my country asks me, I will take the bad people out and keep the world a perfect place. I will give the poor my house. I will stop bad food. I will give bad people away. I will pay my army extra money for cleaning people’s houses, and I will call my army the Face Paints. I can make poor houses better. I love my country.julian-avatar-1107-128x160.jpg

Happy President’s Day, everyone.

posted by Julian Martinez, Writers in the Schools

I’m Important!

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The Important Book by Margaret Wise Brown is a great way to introduce the paragraph, main idea, and supporting details. Each page of the book starts, “The important thing about…” and describes what’s important about shoes, daisies, spoons, the sky, and the wind.

After I read the book, we discuss the pattern of the paragraphs. First, the class creates a paragraph together, with “The important thing about our class is…” The students discuss their ideas, and we decide on one main idea. The students give me ideas for supporting details, and I write everything on the board.

Before students write individually, I have them brainstorm aloud what they might use as their topic sentence. I’m amazed by what the second graders say: “The important thing about me is I enjoy my life” and “The important thing about me is I have compassion and mercy.”

Cooking

The important thing about me is that I love to cook. I get dough and sauce and spin the dough in the sky. I get it warm in the oven. Then I get it flat to eat. I get cheese, pepperonis, and sauce and put the sauce first and then the other ingredients after the sauce. And wallah—you have a pizza. Then I can eat my pizza. The important thing about me is I love to cook.

by Sierra, 2nd Gradewits-blog-pics-007.jpg

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

Mapmaking and Storytelling

“I have an existential map; it has ‘you are here’ written all over it” – comedian Stephen Wright

There’s something about maps that appeals to the imagination. Maybe it’s the expanse of unknown places beckoning to us, or the comfort of charting what we do know from a different viewpoint. Making maps can help students think through a variety of writing challenges. Because maps are representational, they seem to invite metaphor-based poetry. Mapping emotions, families, or one’s own brain are particularly inviting prompts for poems. Maps of one’s room, home, or neighborhood are excellent prompts for memoir pieces; the more detailed, the better. The act of drawing the map’s elements, along with pondering their spatial relationships, allows students to develop their thoughts in a different way, and makes for more descriptive writing.

As an extension of the Poetry Monster prompt, I asked my third grade students to draw maps of the countries where their monsters lived. In drawing these maps, these young writers created geographical and cultural contexts that helped round out their Poetry Monster characters. The written descriptions of the maps also became the basis for the settings for their stories. Below are two different approaches some students took to this prompt:

My place, my secret place, is called Horinasin. Horinasin has only prisoners, current rivers, Everest waterfalls with pure water, a flower ofhorinasin illusions, a forest of echoes, a famous old terrorizing Book of Death, and perfect hills. It is always freezing, with icy winds, and the sun is frozen. Also, the lake of horrors contains fast alligator groups and poisonous snakes. There are only five dungeon rooms; the rest of the prisoners have to sleep on the floor. The dungeons are made out of hard, cold rocks of cement. The prisoners eat stale bread and cold, freezing brook water from the Current River. They don’t have any celebrations. And the only one who freed himself—we don’t know his name.

by Victoria, 3rd grade

To get to the Lost City, you have to use all your imagination, but think of happy things, and BOOM, you’re in the Forest of Wishes, where you find treasure. Then you walk straight and get to the Tree of Wonder, map of the lost citywhere all your thoughts go in and come back with answers. Next, you see the Lake of Books. You put your hand in and think of a book you want to read, and take your hand out, and there it is. Then you can walk out and see a mine with a jewel, and you take out the jewel. You walk straight up and see the city made out of pencils, paper and books. When they turn red, you follow the path and see the most delicious fruit. After you take one bite, make a wish, and you’re in the Maze of Wonder. Once you get out, you see a big tree that takes you to the mayor, who is Mona Lisa’s dad. You ask where Mona Lisa is, and he will show you where her room is. She has a huge closet which is filled with a ton of pretty clothes, and she has a machine that you press a button and it changes the weather. And when you want to leave, you just take a bite out of the fruit and wish.
by Zoe, 3rd grade

For more mapmaking ideas, try Sara Fanelli’s My Map Book (also mentioned here), which presents an array of imaginative maps that appeal to young children. Also, a triateacher in one of my classroom placements recently shared with me her much-loved copy of The Atlas of Experience, a thought-provoking volume of emotional maps that would appeal to older students and adults as well.

posted by Tria Wood, Writers in the Schools

 

Catching Mardi Gras

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Family traditions give me great joy–they keep me connected to my family and my culture. I was curious about my students’ traditions. The students brainstormed about their favorite family tradition using their senses. Many of them had fond memories of celebrating Thanksgiving, Christmas, and Hanukkah. William decided to write about Mardi Gras.

Catching Beads on Mardi Gras

Mostly every year I go to Mardi Gras to catch beads. Then we pick out the greatest side (the left side to be exact). It takes about one hour for the floats to come. I hear people screaming like wild hyenas from far away places. As the floats get in range, the screaming echoes louder and louder and louder till…the floats are here, Ahh! We run out in the streets to get beads. Next thing I know, it’s raining beads like a huge snow storm. I watch them fall, yellow, then red and purple. Sometimes green, black, and maroon. Even sometimes, when you’re lucky, you get toy footballs and fake spears and toy footballs shaped beads as the floats go by. I’m waiting for the McDonald float. I yell, “Throw me something” at Ronald McDonald, and he throws me sugar cookies! When we get home, we count our beads and wear them. Then I go to bed and eat my cookies, of cowits-blog-pics-007.jpgurse.

by William, 3rd grade

(photo by lumis via flickr)

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

Story Surgery

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Story Surgery by Samantha, Entering Second Grade

Sometimes students resist revision because they are physically unable to envision how they can add or move text around, as we have learned to do on our computers. Story surgery is something students enjoy because it’s almost like an art project. This is an intense, time-consuming activity that often gets very messy. But writing isn’t a tidy process inside one’s head, so why should it be on paper?

Surgery tips: Many students cut straight across their paper, disregarding where a sentence begins or ends. This will ruin their surgery. Model cutting around sentences. I don’t allow students to glue down their revised piece until they’ve reread the whole thing over again. Story surgery works best with third graders and older.

Supplies: scissors, glue, their writing, another larger sheet of paper (not lined), an envelope.
1. Do not let children write on the backs of their papers for the piece you want to conduct the surgery on.

2. Model for the children how story surgery will work, using a sample piece of writing.

3. As you are modeling, have students give you ideas on what needs to be Crossed Out, Added, Rearranged, Exchanged (C.A.R.E.).

4. Actually cut the paper and move the text apart, you may add the new ideas (on the larger sheet of paper) in the new space you’ve created.

5.Reread all of the changes you’d made to your piece.

6. Paste all of the text that you want to keep onto the larger sheet of paper.

7. If you’ve had students write the dialogue and thoughts of characters on Post It Notes, have students incorporate that into their surgery.

8. In an envelope, students save the sentences, phrases, and words they’ve “cut out” of their final piece.

I tell the students, “You never know—the sentence you’ve cut out this time might be the inspiration for your next piece of writing.”wits-blog-pics-007.jpg

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools

Carets, a Delicious Writing Treat

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To encourage my students to revise, I bring in this lesson by Marcia Chamberlain. Students as young as first grade can learn to use the caret and delete editing symbols. Before students revise their individual pieces, we revise a piece of writing as a class. I bring in a carrot to help teach using the “caret.” Students use the carrot to point to where they want something added. To practice deleting, students take turns leading the class in making the loop de loop sign in the air; we create a funny noise to make with the movement.

In the above example, the original line of the poem read, “the sound of the big dolphins.” The students agreed that ‘big’ was a boring word, so they replaced it with ‘humongous.’ I asked the students to create the actual sound they believed dolphins make, so we could include that in the poem. “Tri tri” is what they came up with.

Then it’s time for students to revise their own pieces. I bring in red pens for students to revise with or let students select one of their colored pencils. The novelty of writing with a new implement is often enough to make revising exciting and fun!amy-lin-in-a-maze.jpg

Don’t Burst My Bubble

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I tell students that one way to develop their characters is by including their thoughts and dialogue. I draw a speech bubble and thought bubble on the board and then we discuss the differences. Students always catch on quickly because they read comics. As a class, we practice adding thoughts and dialogue to an example story.

When it’s time to revise on their own, students draw speech and thought bubbles directly onto their paper with a colored pencil, so they can see the changes they’ve made. Another way to do this activity is by having students draw their bubbles onto Post It wits-blog-pics-007.jpgnotes and then sticking them directly onto their draft.

posted by Amy Lin, Writers in the Schools