Comments on: Night http://witsblog.org/2008/05/08/night/ Writers in the Schools (WITS) Celebrates Kids--in their own Words Fri, 25 Jul 2008 07:58:10 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU By: annie http://witsblog.org/2008/05/08/night/#comment-2908 annie Sun, 11 May 2008 00:09:07 +0000 http://witsblog.org/?p=809#comment-2908 "spiders tickling each other" - what a completely charming image this evokes. “spiders tickling each other” - what a completely charming image this evokes.

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://witsblog.org/2008/05/08/night/#comment-2907 Sweet Talking Guy.. Sat, 10 May 2008 23:23:45 +0000 http://witsblog.org/?p=809#comment-2907 From the twinkling of the stars to the spiders tickling each other - I can hear the night noise - Wow! From the twinkling of the stars to the spiders tickling each other - I can hear the night noise - Wow!

]]> By: Ofira Sephiroth http://witsblog.org/2008/05/08/night/#comment-2906 Ofira Sephiroth Sat, 10 May 2008 09:58:36 +0000 http://witsblog.org/?p=809#comment-2906 I agree with stan ski. Most of the time I just fall into bed and pass out, never paying attention to the rhythms of the night - something I'm going to have to start doing. I agree with stan ski. Most of the time I just fall into bed and pass out, never paying attention to the rhythms of the night - something I’m going to have to start doing.

]]> By: stan ski http://witsblog.org/2008/05/08/night/#comment-2900 stan ski Fri, 09 May 2008 04:04:07 +0000 http://witsblog.org/?p=809#comment-2900 We should all spend a little more time listening We should all spend a little more time listening

]]> By: mariacristina http://witsblog.org/2008/05/08/night/#comment-2899 mariacristina Fri, 09 May 2008 00:02:18 +0000 http://witsblog.org/?p=809#comment-2899 The anaphora is well done here, as is the formation of the lines. There's a great attention paid to rhythm and sound. I would love to hear this poem recited by the author. My favorite line is of gravity pushing you into the bed. I haven't thought about those kinds of feelings for a long time. Wonderful! The anaphora is well done here, as is the formation of the lines. There’s a great attention paid to rhythm and sound. I would love to hear this poem recited by the author.

My favorite line is of gravity pushing you into the bed. I haven’t thought about those kinds of feelings for a long time.

Wonderful!

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