Comments on: Wake Up http://witsblog.org/2008/04/30/wake-up/ Writers in the Schools (WITS) Celebrates Kids--in their own Words Wed, 08 Feb 2012 19:27:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: annie http://witsblog.org/2008/04/30/wake-up/#comment-3414 Tue, 04 Nov 2008 01:54:48 +0000 http://wits.wordpress.com/?p=724#comment-3414 I love the rhythm AND the message of what you have written here. Bravo.

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://witsblog.org/2008/04/30/wake-up/#comment-3409 Fri, 31 Oct 2008 00:49:36 +0000 http://wits.wordpress.com/?p=724#comment-3409 Love the way this reads and rhymes. However, I’d change just one word in the last sentence, I’d change ‘a’ nation to ‘one’ nation because I feel that you need to bring the first line thought back in to endorse the wake-up call at the end.

Very nicely written piece!

]]> By: stan ski http://witsblog.org/2008/04/30/wake-up/#comment-3408 Thu, 30 Oct 2008 22:42:28 +0000 http://wits.wordpress.com/?p=724#comment-3408 You’re right about ‘no illumination’.

]]> By: Tumblewords http://witsblog.org/2008/04/30/wake-up/#comment-3407 Thu, 30 Oct 2008 17:09:20 +0000 http://wits.wordpress.com/?p=724#comment-3407 It is time for a waking up! We have been arrogantly complacent. Good thoughts!

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