the wavy corn the lady
standing the baby sleeping
the mom watching the morning
comes the animal waking the
daylight is coming the forest
singing the animals creeping
musical sounds everywhere it’s like
a band it’s sleeping children
keeping and sleeping they’re
waiting for morning waiting for
evening waiting for sleeping again
until that time comes
everybody will be sleeping
everybody except the moon
and the sun everybody will
be sleeping everybody
I tell you and you
believe me believe
it like a dream it’s
true it’s true and
good
by Anancia, 4th grade
January 31, 2008 at 1:10 pm |
where do they get it??? who taught this young lady about line breaks and thought continuum’s… i am really impressed
January 31, 2008 at 1:11 pm |
For sure, just sing it out!
January 31, 2008 at 9:17 pm |
Awesome! The repetitions are great!
February 1, 2008 at 12:15 am |
wisdom, indeed
February 3, 2008 at 2:48 pm |
A songster!
February 5, 2008 at 3:24 pm |
oh such wisdom from one so little, I loved this poem.. beautiful.
April 1, 2009 at 3:01 pm |
Most beautiful! Give Anancia my thanks.
Michael