The Leaf

fall-leaves-by-smallchih-v-flickr.jpgI am in a tree.
I see kids.
Birds fly above me.
I fall down and land on an ant.
I hear a train from far away.
A girl picks me up,
then she throws me on the ground.
The people step on me a lot of times.

I am the leaf.

by Jasmine, 1st Grade
[photo by smallchih via flickr]

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By rzayala11, on October 8, 2007 at 4:06 am, under nature, poetry, student, writers in the schools. Tags: , , , , , , . 2 Comments
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  • philosophyoflife  On October 17, 2007 at 12:10 pm
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    A delightful reflection of “The Leaf”.

    You have captured so beautifully the observations in writing.

    Well Done.

  • Karen  On January 10, 2009 at 4:01 am
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    Great use of personification here Jasmine.
    Well done!
    karen

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