I Am Like a Flower

I am like a flower that grows into what it becomes and moves on. I like to play, run, and all kinds of things. I am like Benjamin Franklin fulfilling his dream and doing what I want to do and being what I want to be. I am not an empty blank page that no one cares about. I am not like a pen that is forced into being. I am a woman and I am saved. I am not a crayon that gets put in a box. I am like a bird being free in the air. I’m like a caterpillar that flies into a beautiful creature. I am a spirit that goes through the world.

by Bryanna, 5th grade, Nehemiah Center

Posted by rzayala11. Categories: imagination, poetry, self-portrait, student, writers in the schools. 8 Comments

8 Responses »

mememe on April 8, 2008 at 9:38 am said:

hahahahajajjjajaaj,,,, nice one=) jia you!!!

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rachel wong on April 14, 2009 at 5:42 pm said:

could you please make it look more like a poem instead of a paragraph because i need to copy it for my project.

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gaby on March 30, 2010 at 7:44 pm said:

i really like your poem:)
hint/you shouldn’t put names it will look better

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april on November 8, 2010 at 12:25 am said:

wOw its a beautiful pOem i like it, but i want it in a form of poem not in paragraph but its ok its nice…..

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winnie pooh on April 8, 2011 at 2:39 am said:

U should make it ryhme! but anyways its really nice

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rjames on May 9, 2011 at 7:27 am said:

This is so much like me. I am loved by everyone and I want to full fill my dreams. It’s just me. I love this poem!

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Jodiann on May 14, 2011 at 6:50 pm said:

i like this poem it has help me out alot

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DEAYSIA on December 11, 2011 at 6:22 pm said:

I AM LIKE A FLOWER TO

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