The Pond Speaks

Balboa Pond Lily part deux.

Image by peasap via Flickr

The great thing
is not having a
mind. You know
I do not
have a mouth, but
the truth is, I
am speaking now.
Do you
ever permit yourself
to swim in my water?
If you like
to swim in me,
the pond,
I would like
to talk with you.
I like to see bugs
because
I like frogs.
They like to hop over me
to eat
on lilypads.
I smell food sometimes
because human beings
like to camp
all around me,
and I get to talk
with all of them;
whisper all the time

when they come.

by Katherine, 4th grade

Grandparents

The Mexican Hat Dance

Image by Umpqua via Flickr

I have never met my grandparents before, but my mom told me about them. She told me that my grandpa got milk from the cow and made it into cheese then sold it. She told me that they had lots of animals, like cows, pigs, horses, dogs, sheep, and goats. When my mom was little, my grandpa gave her a horse for her birthday. Her name was Star. My mom told me once there was a fox that was trying to get in the chicken pen and eat a chicken, but my grandpa saw it and scared it away. My mom looked in our closet to find a picture of Mexico that they took with the animals and my grandparents and my mom when she was little. First I saw a picture of a pig named Gordita, and she had piglets that he sold. Whenever there were baby chicks, cows, horses or goats, my grandpa would sell them. My grandma took a picture of the dog playing with the chicken. There was some stuff in the box with the pictures. There was a sombrero and a little statue of a Chihuahua dancing the Mexican hat dance. She put the box away and started thinking about going to Mexico. It’s a gateway to a lifetime.

by Christian, 4th grade

Student Writing Contest: Poems for Peace

In honor of Conflict Resolution Day, the  Association of Conflict Resolution is sponsoring the following opportunity:

Peace Poem Contest Rules
http://www.creducation.org/cre/crday/poetrycontest/

1. Eligibility. The contest is open to all students in grades 3 – 12.
2. Submission Period. Entries will be accepted between September 1, 2010 and November 1, 2010,11:59 PM Eastern (10:59 PM Central; 9:59 PM Mountain; 8:59 PM Pacific; 5:59 PM Hawaii).
3. To Enter. Write a poem that describes “Peace in My Community”. Please write a title for your poem. Limit your poem to 20 lines. Poems must be in English. Limit: 1 poem per student, 20 per school. Please do not put your name or school on the poem (for fairness in judging).
ALL POEMS SUBMITTED MUST BE THE STUDENT’S OWN, ORIGINAL WORK, AND NOT PREVIOUSLY PUBLISHED.
4. Prizes. Prizes will be awarded in three categories: Grades 3-5; 6-8; and 9-12. First Place: $100. Second Place: $75. (prizes are in U.S. dollars)
5. Announcement of Winners. Winners will be contacted by December 1, 2010.
6. Sponsor. The Association for Conflict Resolution (ACR) is a professional organization dedicated to enhancing the practice and public understanding of conflict resolution. This contest is being sponsored as an activity for ACR’s Conflict Resolution Day. For information about ACR and Conflict Resolution Day, go to www.acrnet.org/crday
7. General Conditions.
Poems will not be returned. Entrants should keep a copy of their submissions.
Association for Conflict Resolution assumes no responsibility for entries that are lost, incomplete, misdirected, illegible, or late, or for failed computer transmissions or technical failures.
Association for Conflict Resolution reserves the right, in its discretion, to reject entries that it believes are unlawful, libelous, or would be detrimental to the reputation of Conflict Resolution Day or the Association for Conflict Resolution.
Poems with profanity, obscenity, vulgarity, or anything else which overrides the general norms of civility will not be eligible for prizes.
Entry must comply with all contest rules to be eligible for a prize. The Association for Conflict Resolution reserves the right not to award any prizes.
Selected entries (including those that were not awarded prizes) may be displayed at the ACR National Conference and may be compiled in a poetry book or other form (including electronically) as may be determined by the Association for Conflict Resolution.
Winning students will have the opportunity to submit a digital tape recording of their poem, which the Association for Conflict Resolution may link to its website.
Winners will be selected by a panel of judges named by the Association for Conflict Resolution. The judges will evaluate the entries using the following criteria: exploration of theme, impact on reader, originality, literacy, message. Judges’ decisions are final.

Map of My Heart

The WITS approach to teaching creative writing often springs from the inspiring writing and art that we love. Here is a lesson–although not originally ours–that exemplifies our work with young children.

Grade level: 1st – 3rd
Genre: poetry
Objectives: To make discussion about brainstorming, symbolism and revision accessible to young students
Primary sources: My Map Book by Sara Fanelli
Materials: paper, markers
Contributors: Cissy Gully, Tria Wood

Many times, students forgo planning and brainstorming activities and immediately begin writing. This lesson utilizes a preliminary art project as a method of getting the students to brainstorm without realizing it. During the poetry writing portion of the lesson, reading an example poem and discussing the symbolism used in it is an important step in encouraging the students to use symbolism in their own poetry. Finally, sharing their poetry aloud with the class prompts revision in the friendliest and most comfortable of ways.

Begin by showing Sara Fanelli’s My Map Book to the class. Pass out a blank sheet of paper to the class and instruct them to draw pictures of things that are in their heart similar to the maps they saw in Fanelli’s book. After fifteen minutes of drawing, stop them and reveal that they all just engaged in brainstorming.

Share an example poem with the class. It is important for the students to see an example of how the words in a poem such as this one convey more than just their literal meaning. Discuss the symbolic meaning of each line of the poem, asking for student input with each new symbol.

“My Heart”

Tria Wood, WITS writer

My heart is made of rubies, antique buttons, and pencil stubs.
My heart is a piñata filled with clementines and caramels.
My heart is a tiny white finch singing in her nest of thorns.
My heart is a silver snowflake melting on your tongue.

When students begin to write their own poems, challenge them to use their words to symbolically describe what is in their heart, rather than writing a list of all the things they drew on the map of their heart.

After fifteen minutes of working independently on their poems, pick volunteers to share their poems with the class and then let those volunteers choose two students to say one thing they liked about their poem and one thing they wondered. The readers should take the feedback from their classmates and use it to revise their poems. Allow all the students who did not share with the class to pair up, read their poem to their partner, and get feedback to use for revision.

EXAMPLE

“My Heart”

Julia D., 2nd Grade

My heart is a giant stack of
books that won’t ever stop.
My heart is
a gray morning in rain.
My heart is filled with sweet chocolate.
My heart is filled with strawberries that I love
and daisies blossoming
in the Spring.
My heart is filled with snowy afternoons in Italy.
My heart is sprayed with fun
and laughter and happiness.

If you try this exercise with your students or if you do it on your own, feel free to share the results with us.

Where Are We Now: Kristina McDonald

I have had nearly 9,000 lunches in my lifetime. Some have been out of a paper bag or a Star Wars lunch box. Some have been at fancy restaurants that serve food that I can’t pronounce. I’ve had a hamburger in a revolving restaurant, and I had a chicken basket once in an underground cavern. I’ve even had buffalo wings with one of the world’s most famous bowlers and a champagne lunch with Andrea Ferguson White.

But I can honestly say I’ve never had a more enjoyable (or adorable) lunch than this past Saturday, when two of my students and their mom took me out to a Japanese restaurant.

“You have to hear what you’ve done to them,” the mom told me.

For the next hour I listened as Helena, 7, and Gabriel, 6, took turns talking over each other and telling me all about the stories and plays that they had written since they started attending the Saturday morning Young Writers Workshop at Discovery Green last October. Their mom used to read to them every night. Now, story time has become them writing and acting out their own original works.

When the brother-sister duo first appeared in my class, I had the impression that they were rather shy. However, I quickly learned that the reason they were so quiet is because they were constantly thinking and coming up with new creative ideas to catch me off guard.

I still remember a lesson I led where the students stuck their hand in a mystery box and pulled out a word that they had to use as the next word in their story. Gabriel, who shared my love of dragons, pulled out the word, “history.” He asked me if I meant the subject in school, so I explained that history does mean things that have happened in the past, but also that we all have our own histories just like each country has its own history. I could see him thinking about it for a minute, and just when I thought he wasn’t getting it and we would need to talk it out some more, he plopped on the floor and wrote, “My dragon and I are a history of wonder.” (This line would later serve as the inspiration for a poem I read before an audience.)

Just this past week, Helena blew me away with the line, “Twisted is my homework in the sky.” I told her that was a great line, and she smiled her shy little smile and said, “I know.”

She explained to me over lunch that she and her brother have been co-writing a series of 12 novels about two different fantasy worlds that they created and how the worlds start to interact. She was still relaying the finer aspects of the plot to me by the time she finished her gyoza, and all I could feel was a sense of awe at her constant excitement. It occurred to me that I had no good excuse for not finishing my own novel when this creative little 7-year-old was just cranking them out. She wondered if I would remember her when I was famous, and I insisted instead that she remember me when they become famous and start their brother/sister book tour.

This past year was my first as a WITS writer, and sadly it also (at least temporarily) my last since I am leaving Houston to pursue an MFA degree in poetry. I have been teaching in various capacities for awhile though, and I know that it can be difficult to qualify how much impact you really have on your students, particularly when you only see them for an hour every week like I did. I have tried my best to memorize all the excitement and pride I felt at this lunch, and I plan on carrying it with me on my journey as a reminder of the power of creative writing.

by Kristina McDonald, Writers in the Schools (WITS)

Join Your Neighbors this Saturday for Books on the Bayou

WHAT:    The Houston Public Library (HPL) kicks off  the 9th Annual Books on the Bayou, a series that   promotes community reading of the same book at the same time. The selection for 2010 is Persepolis: The Story of Childhood by Marjane Satrapi. The public is invited to discover the book through discussions, a film screening, Persian cuisine, and musical and dance performances.

WHEN:     Saturday, August 28, 11 am – 5 pm

WHERE:  Central Library, 500 McKinney, Houston, TX 77002

WHO:        Guest speakers Mayor Annise Parker, HPL Director Dr. Rhea Brown Lawson

This event is free and open to the public. Please join HPL in celebrating a culture of  literacy and read Persepolis with your neighbors. For more information visit, the HPL website or call 832-393-1313.

WITS is pleased to honor Mayor Parker for her support of literacy and art programs at A Celebration of Story, November 4, 2010, at the Junior League of Houston. Jeannette Walls and young writers of WITS will share in the celebration of their stories at this memorable event. We invite you to make a difference with us.

WITS Welcomes Visitors to Houston

Today WITS welcomes seventeen colleagues from across the US for the first WITS Alliance National Conclave. The group will meet for three days in downtown Houston.

The participants are:

Jim Walker, Second Story Indianapolis

Janet Hurley, True Ink, Asheville, NC

Megan McNamer, Missoula Writing Collaborative, Montana

Jeanine Walker, Seattle Arts & Lectures

Michele Kotler and Keith Kaminski, Community Word Project, New York City

Janice Hatfield and Krystia Nora, California University of Pennsylvania

Josephine Jones, Colorado Writers in the Schools

Kristine Uyeda and Alise Alouisi, InsideOut, Detroit MI

Nicole Robinson, The Wick Center for Poetry, Kent State University, Ohio

Sean Nevin and Renee Simms, Young Writers Program, Arizona State University

Terry Thaxton, Literary Arts Partnership, University of Central Florida

Cecily Sailor and Giuseppe Taurino, Badgerdog, Austin, TX

For more information about this event, click here.

Photo Credit: Jenn Edo Photography, Houston

Where Are We Now: Marc McKee

Former WITS writer, Marc McKee, will have a collection of poems titled, Fuse, published in May 2011 by Black Lawrence Press.  Marc is no stranger to publication, however; his chapbook What Apocapypse, won the 2008 New Michigan Press/DIAGRAM Chapbook Competition.  His work has also appeared in Boston Review, Conduit, Crazyhorse, Forklift Ohio, The Journal, LIT, and Pleiades, just to name a few.

Marc McKee is originally from Big Sandy, Texas, and earned his MFA at the University of Houston, after receiving his BS from Indiana University.  These days he is working on his PhD at University of Missouri at Columbia where he lives with his wife, Camellia Cosgray.

Top Posts for Summer 2010

Accomplished

Achievement is someone
with a paper in his hand and
an accomplished face with
his arms stretched out
screaming and yelling
“Yes! Yes! I did it!
I made it.
I did what everyone said
I couldn’t do.
I feel as excited as an animal
at the zoo during feeding time.
I also feel like a fierce
and wild tiger on the loose
being chased.
I feel like I’m a fire that
is just beginning
to light up.”

By Mina
8th grade

Photo by Don Gato via Flickr

How I Feel Today

Happy
Today I feel so happy.
I love candy.
Because.
I don’t know why I’m happy.

Oh, I am happy because
I stuck myself today.

Sometimes, I feel split in half,
like a sunset with beautiful flowers and
a frost with so much horror and death.

But today I feel like dancing,
like the couple in Paris and
playing like a Jack Russell terrier
and eating much too much candy
which the hospital won’t give me.

And I am sipping a cup of tea.

By DeAndrea, age 12

Collage made by the author and published in the anthology, My Hand is So Complicated and My Mind is a Mystery, published by Writers in the Schools and Texas Children’s Hospital

Film Mao’s Last Dancer Gets a Warm Houston Welcome

Li Cunxin’s remarkable autobiography, Mao’s Last Dancer, made its U.S. debut at River Oaks Landmark Theatre last Friday, receiving impressive reviews from movie critics and fans.  Li achieves his rise to stardom as an aspiring young dancer from Beijing who earns a scholarship to perform at  the Houston Ballet despite opposition from Chinese government. He overcomes his obstacles with fierce determination and later serves as the Houston Ballet’s Principal Dancer from 1981 – 1995.

WITS was honored to have Li share his captivating story about family, loss, and the journey of  living the American Dream to everyone who attended the WITS 25th Anniversary Celebration last November. It is likely the film, based on his best-selling book, will teach audiences here and abroad about the powerful experience of telling one’s personal story.

Read the Houston Chronicle’s complete review here.

WITS invites you to A Celebration of Story, Thursday, November 4, 2010, 7PM at the Junior League of Houston. This momentous occasion will highlight the personal stories of young writers of WITS and guest speaker Jeanette Walls, best-selling author of The Glass Castle. Individual tickets start at $250 and table sponsorships start at $2500. You can make a secure purchase online by following this link. Don’t miss what is sure to be a sold-out event!

My Name is Memphis


I was born in Gamma’s house and every time I spend the
night there she wakes up and cooks me sausage and grits.
I have a nephew named Jaden who I play ball with. My
favorite things to do are eat, watch TV, and play video games
all day. My favorite video game is Teenage Mutant Ninja
Turtle Smash Up and Spiderman 1. My favorite subject is
math because it’s easy. Last summer
I went to Camp Periwinkle,
Houston Space Center, and
Schlitterbahn. At Schlitterbahn there was a
pirate ship that drops water on you and makes you forget
everything, but it didn’t make me forget because I am
hydro-dynamically designed. It was awesome!

By Memphis,
Age 8

Photo by Brandt Williams via Flickr

Advice from a Nest


Always stay strong for the younger ones
Don’t crack your twigs when everyone’s asleep
Don’t fall apart when no one is there
Don’t let someone fall through or you’ll get hurt too
Always pick a good spot to be made in
Always blend in so bigger birds won’t get the smaller ones
Always say good-bye when the younger ones get old

By Averie, 5th grade
[photo by mistybliss via flickr]

I See Beautiful Leaves and a Flying Bird

Going to the bright sun.

Their ideas are blank

With the background orange.

All they can think of

Is words, words, words.

By Lance, 4th grade
[photo by cosmonautirussi via flickr]